You stole my story and something's got to be done about it.
Watch a good movie sometime without reference to what__ happening but only with attention to how it was photographed; you__l see the change of focus__oom in, pan out, close-up on face, fade to black, open from above__asily. You want to do that in what you write; it__ one of the things that keep people__ eyes on the page, though they__e almost never conscious of it.
"I Give You My Body . . .": How I Write Sex Scenes
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Watch a good movie sometime without reference to what__ happening but only with attention to how it was photographed; you__l see the change of focus__oom in, pan out, close-up on face, fade to black, open from above__asily. You want to do that in what you write; it__ one of the things that keep people__ eyes on the page, though they__e almost never conscious of it.
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